Prince_of_hell
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 | Subject: The Wayward Prince.  Sat Dec 13, 2008 5:27 pm | |
| The Wayward Prince
Whenever a passing wind blew,
the sound of his rustling cloak,
made such an eerie noise,
that terrified all the onlookers
The empty echo of death,
the darkness in his heart,
they are his two friends,
the only things that he cared about.
Vampires paid their homage,
Werewolves cower before him,
The mighty Behemoth gaurds him,
so do Belial and Lucifer.
He stood on a fiery platform,
Looking down upon his faithful Pillagers,
A sinister smile played on his lips,
He was the Elegant Prince Of Hell!
~Prince_of_hell 
Last edited by Prince_of_hell on Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:37 pm; edited 3 times in total | |
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akash
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| | Subject: Re: The Wayward Prince. Sun Dec 21, 2008 11:19 pm | |
| Wow. Its pretty kewl. I like the last stanza. It sorta gives me the feeling of action.  | |
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Prince_of_hell
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| | Subject: Re: The Wayward Prince. Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:38 pm | |
| Thanks,now you understand how kewl being a Dark Pillager is. | |
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akash
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| | Subject: Re: The Wayward Prince. Thu Dec 25, 2008 2:54 pm | |
| Yeah. Its awesome. | |
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Vampire_Girl
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| | Subject: Re: The Wayward Prince. Thu Dec 25, 2008 5:08 pm | |
| Impressive !! But I dint like these lines - " Vampires paid their homage, Werewolves cower before him, "  | |
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Prince_of_hell
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| | Subject: Re: The Wayward Prince. Thu Dec 25, 2008 7:35 pm | |
| Just showing the power of The Prince in that sentence..xD..(Dark Pillagers rock!!)
Anyway..just realised tht you were a vampire too..xD..I don't expect homage from you anyway..(Would be better not to) | |
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Vampire_Girl
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| | Subject: Re: The Wayward Prince. Thu Dec 25, 2008 8:17 pm | |
| - Prince_of_hell wrote:
- Just showing the power of The Prince in that sentence..xD..(Dark Pillagers rock!!)
Anyway..just realised tht you were a vampire too..xD..I don't expect homage from you anyway..(Would be better not to) Lolz..Yeah...Would be better not to... | |
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