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PostSubject: The Fallen Prince.   Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:20 pm

The Fallen Prince


My life is all about regrets
and wounds that refuse to heal
the last ray of hope grows
dimmer..dimmer...and..dimmer..

The sun doesn't semm bright anymore
nor does the azure grass seem sweet
cause without her everything's just
gone...gone...and...gone...

I travel beyond the boundaries of life
finally free from all of my pain and desires
But then...does she even care about me??


Guys and gals please suggest me an appropriate last line.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fallen Prince.   Thu Dec 25, 2008 2:57 pm

Wow its awesome. Heh.. I think I know who you're talking about in this poem. But then again I might be wrong. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Fallen Prince.   Thu Dec 25, 2008 5:10 pm

* Rolls Eyes *

I like it though...you can become a song writer lol!
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PostSubject: Re: The Fallen Prince.   Thu Dec 25, 2008 7:32 pm

Yeah...straight from my heart...(Don't call it a POEM Akash,,)...well..it's just tht I felt to write it down. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: The Fallen Prince.   Fri Dec 26, 2008 7:08 pm

Shocked If its not a poem then what is it?
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PostSubject: Re: The Fallen Prince.   Fri Dec 26, 2008 10:20 pm

xDD!
Whatever....just don't call it a poem...coz accordin to me poems must have proper rhyme..which I sorta hate...lol!
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PostSubject: Re: The Fallen Prince.   Sat Dec 27, 2008 2:23 pm

Why would ya hate rhymes? Thats the main thing which adds special effects to a poem. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The Fallen Prince.   Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:19 pm

Prince_of_hell wrote:
xDD!
Whatever....just don't call it a poem...coz accordin to me poems must have proper rhyme..which I sorta hate...lol!

Hate the rhyme ?? Jeez ! Wierdo !
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PostSubject: Re: The Fallen Prince.   Mon Dec 29, 2008 4:12 pm

Bleah..Akash..you're mssing the point completely..I said I hate Poems ARE MADE of rhymes..so just don't call it a poem..It's different..

And Apple:I hate the rhymes because sometimes.ugg...they are stupid...and btw I love Rhythm..but hate rhymes..

Oh and btw EVERYONE must know by now that I'm a Unique Wierdo!

king -Prince_Lucky
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PostSubject: Re: The Fallen Prince.   Tue Dec 30, 2008 12:48 am

Prince_of_hell wrote:
Bleah..Akash..you're mssing the point completely..I said I hate Poems ARE MADE of rhymes..so just don't call it a poem..It's different..

And Apple:I hate the rhymes because sometimes.ugg...they are stupid...and btw I love Rhythm..but hate rhymes..

Oh and btw EVERYONE must know by now that I'm a Unique Wierdo!

king -Prince_Lucky

Unique Wierdo ??? ROFL !
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PostSubject: Re: The Fallen Prince.   Wed Dec 31, 2008 11:12 am

You see I'm the wierdo among wierdoes..the Wierdo of the Wierdoes..(my..this sounds WIERD though..)
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PostSubject: Re: The Fallen Prince.   Sat Jan 10, 2009 7:50 pm

ONE WORD!! BEAUTIFUL
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PostSubject: Re: The Fallen Prince.   Sat Jan 10, 2009 8:16 pm

Thanks buddy. Smile
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